Monthly Archive for February, 2009

Solomon’s Grave

The preview of Solomon’s Grave by Daniel Keohane is now up and running through Dragon Moon Press’s Free-Read™ program. Basically, the unedited reviewer’s proof is yours to preview for free.

This is your chance to be a reviewer with an advance copy of the novel. There’s a link on every page, and if you like what you see, you can advertise the link, click through to preorder the book from Amazon.com or post a review.

Nathan Dinneck’s new role as pastor may be shorter than he expects.

For thousands of years a secret has been hidden from the world and protected from those who covet its power. Popes and Kings have sought it. Theologians and historians have debated its very existence. In every generation since the days of Solomon, one person is chosen to keep its secret, protect it from an ageless group claiming the treasure for their own dark god. After millennia of searching, they are finally closing in on their prize.

Evil has followed Nathan home to Hillcrest, Massachusetts.

Nightmares of temples and blood sacrifice, visions of angels and cemeteries foreshadow a dark battle to come. In the balance hangs the lives and souls of those chosen to protect history’s most holy relic, perhaps even the gateway to heaven itself.

Preview the novel now!

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Coming Attractions

Lots of things are in the works!

I’ve got several books forthcoming from Dragon Moon Press, and I’m excited about all of them. Nina Kimberly the Merciless by Christiana Ellis, Silver and Gold by David Sakmyster, Solomon’s Grave by Dan Keohane and The Necromancer’s Bones by Deby Fredericks, are ready for final proofs, and there are still more that I’m in the process of working on, or have on deck!

I’ve also got some internet and real-live appearances coming up:

You can catch me over at NaNoEdMo — National Novel Editing Month kicks off on March first. Keep an eye out for an article of mine to be appearing on the site. I might also be popping up in the forums here and there.

March 27-29, I’ll be at Ad Astra in Toronto. This will be my first time speaking on panels at a convention, and the staff so far has been great at making me feel welcomed and at ease.

Looking ahead, you’ll also be able to catch me at Dragon*Con, September 4-7.

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The Home Stretch Exception

As a freelancer, I try to follow two simple rules about my time:

1. Never send e-mail to a client at an off-hour, or they will think they can own your evenings for no extra charge.

2. Never send e-mail to a client on a weekend, or they will think they can own your weekends for no extra charge.

For the most part, these rules work for me. Rarely is anything so rushed that I can’t wait until morning (or Monday morning) to ask a question or respond to a query. If I get work done over the weekend, it’s my choice. The client doesn’t have to know about it. They’re paying me by the page, not the hour; If I have nothing to do and I want to get ahead, sure, I might knock out a few more pages. They don’t have to know when I did them.

There’s one exception that I make to these rules. It’s not something I set out to do, but it’s something I’ve done enough anyway that I’ve begun to notice it as a pattern. I call it the home stretch exception because it happens when I’m working in the last fifty pages or so of a really engaging manuscript.

When I edit a first pass, I like for the material to be completely fresh to me. I know that the eye has a tendency to see what it expects to see instead of what’s actually on the page, and going into a passage with no preconceptions about what I’ll see there is the best way for me to combat that. I can catch typos and grammatical errors and see things from the first-time reader’s perspective more easily when I’m reading something for the first time.

When I’m in the home stretch of a novel, then, I don’t like to read ahead to see what happens next. If I’m reading in the manuscript, I’m editing in the manuscript. Otherwise, when I go back to edit those passages, I know what happens in them. There’s more of a chance that my mind will fill in any missing or incorrect words, and I have to work that much harder to see what’s really on the page.

If an especially gripping novel is gathering speed and tension toward a big finish, this becomes something of a battle of willpower. I don’t want to read ahead, but I want to see what happens! If I try to walk away from the manuscript at the end of the normal workday, I’ll find myself tempted to sneak back to it. It’s always at about the thirty or fifty page mark, somewhere around there, that I completely lose the battle against suspense. I’ll keep going until the book is done, because I have to see what happens next.

Keep in mind that editing is not like pleasure-reading. It’s slower and more meticulous. It involves pausing to correct things, to query and comment, to take notes, to look things up. Managing about ten pages an hour is more or less standard. For a manuscript that needs a lot of intense suggestions and corrections and research, I manage about five. And I’m not a slow reader.

With that in mind, now think about what those fifty pages mean in terms of time. They mean that I occasionally inflict a rather late night on myself, all because I’m fortunate to work with good storytellers who weave tales that manage to hook even me, even while I’m focusing on the technical.

And considering that, not only can I not complain about an occasional self-inflicted late night, but I also always feel as though my conscience won’t let me keep it to myself. It’s the highest praise I can give an author—that their writing kept me up at my desk because I couldn’t stop turning pages—and if they’ve earned it, they deserve to hear it.

Now that I’ve said it, though…excuse me if I sneak off for a nap!

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Writing Groups

Writing groups can be a great tool to help you polish up your manuscript and refine your craft, but if you’re not careful they can also send you in the wrong directions. Today’s post focuses on the pros and cons of writing groups, and will hopefully help you decide if they’re the right kind of resource for you.

First of all… What’s a writing group? It’s a vague term that can mean a few different things. Some people use it as, well, literally what it sounds like: A group of people who get together, sit mostly silently, and write. Sometimes if you’re lacking motivation or you’re easily distracted, being around other people who are writing can motivate you to put your head down and concentrate. Of course, depending on the composition of the group, there’s a chance that it’ll be a lot of distraction and gossip, and very little writing. There’s definite value to hanging out with other writers and talking about your craft and your experiences, but if you’re joining a writing group to sit down and write, it’s good to make sure that some writing happens at some point, too!

Other writing groups are, more correctly, writers’ groups. They’re places where you can bring something you’ve written, share it around with other writers, and get some friendly and constructive critique on it. Most of the time when people talk about writing groups, this is the kind they mean.

A good writers’ group can be a valuable tool:

  • * It can keep you motivated and writing for an audience.
  • * It can train you toward meeting deadlines, so that you have work to present at group meetings.
  • * Any writing practice is good writing practice. The more you write, the more you sharpen your craft.
  • * It gives you more exposure to others’ writing. It’s sometimes easier to recognize the pitfalls in another’s work than in your own. Once you spot trends you want to avoid, you’ll be more aware of them in your own writing.
  • * It’s an opportunity to network and share contacts, and possibly learn about potential opportunities (contests, anthologies seeking submissions, master classes, conferences, etc.).
  • * It’s a social opportunity. Writing is a solitary venture, most times, and real live, in-person people time is a good thing.

If writers’ groups have all that going for them, why do some people swear them off?

  • * If you’re going to be offering your work for critique, you need to consider the credentials of your critics. Are they published? Are they well-published? If they can’t get their own work published, do you want to be taking their advice on how to steer your manuscript toward what publishers want?
  • * Are you a credible critic? Do you feel that you’re in a position to be able to look at a piece of writing objectively and offer concretely helpful advice?
  • * Quantity is not quality. I know I just said that all writing practice is good writing practice, and that’s true. But all writing practice is not created equally. If you’re focusing on pushing yourself for a writers’ group deadline instead of focusing on things that need to be a higher priority for you — such as, for example, other projects you might be getting paid to focus on — you may find yourself with more stress than you need, and your other, higher priorities may suffer.
  • * Are you critiquing when you could be writing? If you find yourself being relied upon as an editor more often than you’re receiving helpful feedback as a writer, your away-from-the-group writing time may suffer as well. As with any social commitment, make sure you have the time and energy for it before you take it on.

Some authors hate writing groups, while some recommend them highly. Holly Lisle has a great article called How to Choose a Writers’ Group with a lot of good advice on finding the kind of group you’re looking for, and if you choose to look for one, I strongly suggest giving that a read. It stresses the degree to which the individual group can make the difference between a good experience and a negative one, what to look for and what to look out for.

If you’re currently in a good group, if you have a horror story from a bad group, or if you have an experience or some advice to share, drop me a comment!

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Happy how-do-you-spell-that-again? day!

I don’t usually make two link/image posts in a row, but this time it’s for a special occasion: Valentine’s Day is this weekend.

First of all, since February is Misused Apostrophe Month, let’s set the record straight:

Groundhog Day doesn’t have one.
Valentine’s Day is the day of St. Valentine.
Presidents’ Day is the day of more than one president.

Are we good?

Good. Now, on to business.

While I don’t go out of my way to nitpick the spelling and grammar of my friends and associates, I always appreciate those special, special mishaps that make it into the public domain on posted signs, on product packaging, and on… cakes.

Cake Wrecks has a very special Valentine’s themed post. Ah… sweet, sweet spelling.

mmmm cake

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Books and Beauty

Those of us who work with words often have an affinity not just for books but for the architecture and design which houses them.

Trinity College Library

If you love libraries, spend a while sighing longingly at A Compendium of Beautiful Libraries. Caution: may be harmful to your frequent flyer account—you may find yourself making a wishlist of travel destinations as you scroll through.

For beauty and design ingenuity closer to home, Freshome.com’s 30 Creative Bookshelves will give you ideas for your own personal library.

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A Freelancer in Motion…

Over on The Golden Pencil, there’s a great article called Sweating Your Way to Freelance Success, about the importance of exercise for freelancers.

Meanwhile, Spoonfed Design has an article titled Guide to Becoming a Happy Freelancer that also touches on the importance of exercise, along with other tips to keeping an organized home office, personal balance and sense of perspective.

Both of these inspiring articles are relevant for all freelancers, not just writers and designers. Our bodies and minds are the most important tools of our trade! It’s our responsibility to keep them sharpened and in the best working condition that we can.

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Podcasters in the News

This week’s Time Magazine contains an article about the podcasting phenomenon in publishing, featuring our own Scott Sigler and J.C. Hutchins.

Several of my clients are in podcasting/podiobook circles, so I’m very much pro-podcast. I’ve spent enough time with Scott Sigler to know that he’s a great guy and well-deserving of his success.

While I wanted to pass the link along and help celebrate the success of these individuals and the recognition of the media form, I also want to interject a note of my own.

Recording a podiobook isn’t a shortcut to success any more than self-publishing is a shortcut to success. These writers aren’t circumventing the hard work that goes into landing a deal with a major publishing house; if anything, they’re working harder. While traditional paths to publishing deals involve sending a lot of mail, creating a glossy podcast with different voices and ambient music and sound effects and top-notch editing and mixing is a much harder and more time-consuming endeavor, and doing it for free in hopes of gaining some devoted fans and the ear of a publishing executive is really nothing more than a labor of love for the craft.

The men and women who produce the high-end podiobooks that earn this sort of attention, really earn the attention they receive. They put out excellent, polished books with excellent, polished production values. They aggressively promote and market themselves and their products. They have not cheated the system with a shortcut by any means, and their success stories are not fairy tales meant to tell you that shortcuts work, or even exist; they are examples of what can happen when top-notch talent and determination meet.

To Scott, Hutch, Pip, Tee, Christiana, Phil and all the other podiobook authors I’ve had the privilege to meet or work with, I’m proud to know all of you, and your motivation is an inspiration to my own.

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