http://www.gabrielle-edits.com/2010/02/18/said/ Editor -- Substantive and Copyediting: Fiction, Science Fiction, Fantasy Wed, 18 Jan 2012 15:52:59 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 http://www.gabrielle-edits.com/2010/02/18/said/comment-page-1/#comment-7052 Michell Plested Thu, 18 Feb 2010 16:05:41 +0000 http://www.gabrielle-edits.com/?p=446#comment-7052 Excellent post, Gabrielle. I know when I write dialogue I always agonize whether I'm getting it right or not. Too many beats or not enough? Am I showing or am I telling? Are the character's actions supporting the dialogue or in competition with it? Excellent post, Gabrielle. I know when I write dialogue I always agonize whether I’m getting it right or not. Too many beats or not enough? Am I showing or am I telling? Are the character’s actions supporting the dialogue or in competition with it?

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